Rexx Inu

[Seifer]

Name:Rexx Inu

Age:17

Pokemorph: No

Appearance: Picture

Personality:
Rexx was cocky at some points of his life. He really never like to get out of his room or go outside; however, he never really liked to get to know people if they did not like to skateboard or work-out. He loved pokemon and his favorite were dog-like types. Dogs were always his favorite and still are now. He can get to be real quiet, but when he is talking he talks up a storm. He felt sad when he left his family and pokemon.




History:
Rexx lived in the town known as Twinleaf, which was located in the Sinnoh Region. He had a nice house near the woods, which made him happy to see all the animals come out. He has a brother named Seifer, a sister name Miya, a mom named Flora, and a dad named Rob. He had a few friends. He only had a few friends because there were only a few and some who did not like to Skateboard. He had a job a pizza guy.

When Rexx was beginning too live he and his family were sad. But, he just left and said bye for now. After, he Left the house he felt going to a different region. But then he remembered he had let go of his pokemon. He went over to the poke center and traded them in for nothing he thought.So here we go!

Sorry for the ending i gave it some speic and sorry for the lama and gladen history and thats really all i could think of i will update it soon but if you could just take a look at it and approve it then i just post more history in a journal or something on here.

Affiliation:Neutral

[flexa]

:3 Hello there, there are a few issues with this bio.

1. The image for his appearance? Could you link to it rather than post the actual picture? It stretches the page.

2. The personality is mildly lacking in terms of the fact that it only outlines that he's cocky, likes pokemon, and spicy food, along with his job.
I'm sure that if three of his nearest family members died as said in the history, this would affect his personality much more.
Just as well, it would be better if you typed out his dislikes in sentence form along with the personality, instead of adding an extra section.

3. For his history, you may want to elaborate on his feelings about certain things, such as his relationship with his family members, or how he felt after three of them died. How did this affect his outlook on life? I understand that he was depressed, but how depressed? Did this change how he felt about friends, other family?

4. Last, but most definitely not least, you should run this through a spell check, and re-check your grammar and such. There are quite a few typos, and misused grammar, but I'm sure that once you have done all these, I can approve this bio happily!

~Flexa

[flexa]

Thanks for updating this bio. We'll really have to work on your sentence structure and capitalization issues, but otherwise, I think this character is okay to start with. Just make sure you keep proofreading those passages for grammar problems, and it should be okay.

Accepted!